Sunday, December 27, 2009

Character to Character Letter

Dear Sun,
my heart is weakened, i've lost a sister and my woman hood has been taken away from by my new master. Doak is his name, a cruel, insane man, of no values. When i arrived to this hell hole which most people would call my new home, Doak raped me!. He was a married man, his wife Sue as precious as a butterfly and as nice as a bunny. She was the very opposite of Doak, i endured no hardships with her. My heart is broken and feels as if someone crushed it into little puzzle pieces. I wish you were here to comfort me, to make me feel loved, but in due time we will be free and once again together,

sincerely,
Always

1 comment:

  1. Mr. Barbee,
    I am confused about one statement made on your letter. Why did you write, "we will be free"? Explain please. Additionally, remember to use academic language.

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